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The same way the pages of memories from the Assassin's Creed 2 doesn't have "Assassin's Creed 2" in it's name I think the page should be called just "Chapter 1 - Bartolomeo d'Alviano", the Project Legacy part isn't needed.
Plus, since you're creating this separated pages what are you going to do in relation to the part that is already in the main article? Erase and redirect? Do you have anything in mind?
Another thing I talked in the talk page of the main article but didn't get much attention, about how the memories should appear in terms of "design":
Requirements (and others)
Transcript

OR

First Line
Requirements (and others)
Transcript

Personally, I prefer the first option since it makes easier to read the transcript. What do you say? Sekuiya 16:23, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

I'll second the change to get rid of the Project Legacy part. I just added it initially in order to create a connect, and was planning on doing a redirect link, similar to the Mneumonic page, from the main Project Legacy page after I completed the fourth chapter. I'm not quite following the design change you're suggesting, though. Perhaps an example using one of the actual memories?Jxspyder 16:36, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Using the actual memory you just need to look at how the memories in Chapter 1 are done and the "Under Our Noses" part in Chapter 3 is done, you'll notice the difference.

  • Gotcha. I'm liking the way both of those examples, as well as Ch. 4, list them. They seem to flow quite a bit better when you list requirements, then first line + transcripts. Rough look through, it seems like Ch. 2 is the only one that really doesn't follow that set-up.Jxspyder 17:12, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Stuff Missing

This is a list of text/details missing in Chapter 1. Feel free to edit this list:

  • "Tools Of The Trade" first line
  • "Tools Of The Trade" image

Sekuiya 21:28, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

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