My little introduction speech
Well, there we are: the pigeon coop. This is where all the apprenticeship-stuff will be discussed and where you will find your assignments and evaluations. I think it should all be quite self-evident. One little note: I often make distinctions between major and minor assignments - major being your main task, minor assignments being projects "on the side."
Project 1: Bombs
Alright then. For your first project, you'll be revamping the Bombs article. And, since it's your first assignment, I'll even give you an outline of the work that needs to be done. Hopefully, this will make you more familiar with the Manual of Style, and the finer subtleties of editing.
- Some of the quotes are not very inspired and could perhaps be changed with more suitable ones. Also, adding quotes to sections that do not have quotes yet.
- Some of the information currently in the trivia section is important enough to be incorporated in the main body of the article.
- There is a template stating not all Syndicate information is present. Try and find out what information is missing and make sure it is added.
- Also, see if there are any other important instances of bombs being used in games that are not yet in the article. If so, add these too.
- The sourcing can do with a bit of touching up. I noticed that one of the references was broken, and some of others can probably be touched up as well.
- Perhaps most importantly, the sections need altering. Right now, it has 'smoke boms + history' and 'explosive bombs + history.' Try to make it just one history section, like most of our other articles, and use subheaders where you think necessary.
That should be a good start. If you have any questions, let me know here, on my talk page, or on the IRC. You can also keep my apprised of your progress here.
Progress report + questions
- Leave your comments and questions in this section :) --Amnestyyy (Contact me!) 16:14, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
Minor task 1
I'll also give you a minor task straight off the bat. Go to the articles featuring the revamp template. Pick one of these, go over the article and see what needs to be done to make it better. Leave a list here, in the same style as I've left for you above. After I've gone over your to-do list and approved it, you'll revamp this page as well. Good luck!