User blog comment:MarkvA/Gamescom - Assassin's Creed III Preview/@comment-1.125.170.142-20120821095631

You need to work on your writing skills a bit, mainly the use of similar words and spacing out the different subjects that you talk about in the preview. Also you could try reading some other previews from different people and use a similar structure that they use.

Other then that it was a good read.