User blog comment:AltairsDecendant/Stories About Assassin's Creed 1 & 2/@comment-209.177.123.206-20110101113625

the idea is good but the writing is horrible  i would go through and correct you or help you in some of the structure of the fanfic but to tell you the truth i dont feel the desire to waste that ammount of time on a fanfic haha sorry but you should re-read it and try to make it more fluid.