Assassin's Creed Wiki:Featured Article Nominations/Archive 3

 This page lists all the previous nominations for Featured status. Every article nominations listed here have been concluded, and transferred here for reviewing purposes only.

Hunt on Cyprus/Removal - Removed
Featured status removed as per request.. --Vatsa ( talk • Gentek ) 15:39, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Another look at the page made me realized how messed up it was, even before it passed FA status. Overly long paragraphs (some paragraphs contain unnecessary info), messy formatting of pictures, unorganized sectioning, improper/informal wording. I'll do a revamp of the page some time in the future but, for now, I say its status be removed. -- Jack WallsSupermen 09:05, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Remove

 * 1) Yeah, sue me for nominating it before. -- Jack WallsSupermen 09:05, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I see what you mean about the wording. Not difficult to fix, just lengthy and tedious. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  09:53, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Yay. For me some parts are not phrased very well and in some sections there is bad formatting. Romeh  Speak now 16:14, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Could indeed do with quite a bit more work. Nesty  Contact me! 20:29, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) As Blaidd and Rome have said, the wording needs improvement and formatting work. Nostalgia  Let's talk. 03:34, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Daniel Cross & Hannah Mueller/Removal - Keep
With the majority voting to keep and the discussion dead.. --Vatsa ( talk • Gentek ) 15:39, December 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * Look, I let it slide with Daniel Cross because the article was well written and I thought someone might add the mandatory Personality and Traits section soon after it was nominated, but now I see Hannah Mueller on the main page and I have to question some of the Staffs' thought processes at the time they saw these articles on this list. Neither of these articles have the mandatory Personality and Traits section, and Hannah Mueller is badly written at best. Honestly, even if somebody now writes a P&T section for both these articles, they still need to go through the entire process again and be looked at with a fresh set of eyes.

Remove

 * 1) As nominator. -- Jasca Ducato Council Chamber Assassination record 20:11, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Keep

 * 1) Keep. Romeh  Speak now 20:14, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Like many others, I feel the personality/appearance/traits section to be lacking in value. Nesty  Contact me! 20:25, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) No. -- Master Sima Yi 08:39, November 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Nein. We've actually rectified the rules for nomination (both GA and FA) so that it won't require all pre-requisites. This was done after a rather...unique, group discussion, and have all agreed to the new rule changes. Have a look at the rules again and see for yourself. -- Jack WallsSupermen 08:53, November 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) I actually think a Personality and characteristics section would make these two articles better, but if everyone is content with leaving them out seeing as it's no longer a rule, then I think the pages are good enough as they are. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  09:10, November 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Both pages are good as they are now, though in the future both could use a personality and characteristics section. Nostalgia  Let's talk. 03:36, December 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Yeah, I was there for the entire discussion about the personality section, and while it may be required by the rules, it doesn't add much to the article that alredy is there.  Subject 12  Talk to me 04:46, December 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) The article (both of them) have good wording and look good with quotes, pictures ect... they changed the rules. So I'd say keep it the way it is. Teller  Words, On my Screen :O 05:51, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) Both Cello and I agreed that the Personality and characteristics are not mandatory, in the case that the overall article is worthy enough to be kept Featured status, and all the staff are aware of this. Your criteria is, therefore, redundant. -- Master Sima Yi 20:15, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Eight at the top of this page, in big bold letters it says "An article must ...include a "personality and characteristics" section on all character articles." it's one of the rules, as set out since this page first came into existence; It doesn't matter what you and Cello think. -- Jasca Ducato Council Chamber Assassination record 20:57, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I know it says that. Otherwise my comment would've been redundant. And it doesn't matter what Cello and I think? Nice. I'm pretty sure that us staff have written the rules, and therefore we are also the ones who can bend them. Do not hide behind set rules all the time. -- Master Sima Yi 08:41, November 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) If you have problems with the new rule changes, tell it to the judge. -- Jack WallsSupermen 08:56, November 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) It's still there. -- Jasca Ducato Council Chamber Assassination record 11:44, November 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Re-read my first comment thoroughly. -- Master Sima Yi 13:25, November 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) And another thing, don't treat these rules like it's the Ten Commandments or something. God didn't write them, people on this wiki did. We staff can adjust them for the betterment of the wiki. -- Jack WallsSupermen 14:41, November 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Sima: Re-read my response to that comment carefully. Rules are rules for a reason, and why you lot are simply trying to avoid improving the articles so they actually meet the requirements that had been previously agreed rather than try and argue with me, is beyond me. -- Jasca Ducato Council Chamber Assassination record 18:48, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Rodrigo Borgia - Yay
Ba-dum-tss. -- Jack WallsSupermen 08:02, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

As part of my apprenticeship, I have to get Rodrigo Borgia to FA. The page was already in quite a good shape, but I did quite a bit of rewording and some lay-out work. Personally, I think it is good enough as it is now. If you disagree, let me know why and I'll see to it your comments are adressed. Nesty Contact me! 10:30, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) Revamper/nominator Nesty  Contact me! 10:30, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Terrible, absolutely terrib-- oh damn. I've typed this in the Yay section... Oh well, I can't be fucked fixing it. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  03:58, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) So what, you've worked it up to an FA standard, what do you want? A userbox? Wait... do you? -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 04:26, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) -- Master Sima Yi 09:14, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) --Seems Legit  Subject 12  Talk to me 13:15, December 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Very thorough article. Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 19:40, December 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Everyday I'm shufflin' -- Jack WallsSupermen 19:32, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Infiltration of the Castel Sant'Angelo - Yay
Good show.  Subject 12  Talk to me 16:24, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I have expanded and revamped the entire page, replacing images and quotes, and doing a large amount of rewording. I've consulted with Istruttore GuardDog and Istruttore TheSt0ryTeller, both of whom agree that it is of FA quality, after providing me with some suggestions. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 14:31, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As nominator and revamper. Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 14:31, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Master Sima Yi 09:14, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) All my comments have been covered. =GuardDog 11:37, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) I was misquoted! D: What? I did say that? Why was I not informed? Teller  Words, On my Screen :O 12:45, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) It was severely lacking some information on the escape, so I added that. Though I didn't know the proper name for that door on the floor thing, or those mechanisms which held the gate shut, so I just used some generic words for them. I also removed the second paragraph of the Aftermath section, it went into too much detail and was unnecessary. Other than that, the page was written very well, so it's all good now. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  03:35, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Not Bad.jpg  Subject 12  Talk to me 13:15, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Rebecca Crane - Yay
Earned it.  Subject 12  Talk to me 16:24, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

And another one. Blame Sima for the amount of nominations I'm making, he told me to do this :) I think Rebecca's ready for FA - if you disagree, let me know why and I'll go on another edit-spree. Nesty  Contact me! 18:28, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator Nesty  Contact me! 18:28, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Very well done. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  03:58, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Anything they can do, I can do better... faster too. -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 04:26, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) -- Master Sima Yi 09:14, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Sure, looks good. =GuardDog 11:37, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) A good read.  Subject 12  Talk to me 13:15, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Warren Vidic - Yay
Has sufficient votes.. --Vatsa ( talk • Gentek ) 15:23, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

And another one. Sima likes to keep me busy, apparently... Anyway, did some major rewording, moved some images around, created a gallery, added quotes. I think it's ready, if you don't agree, let me know and I'll make it better. Nesty Contact me! 18:51, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator, obviously Nesty  Contact me! 18:51, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Yay. Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 23:30, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) He should have an evil laugh. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  07:00, December 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) We really need a new infobox image. But I fear the chances of getting one is slim. So, I guess it's set to go. -- Jack WallsSupermen 07:39, December 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) I'm an evil scientist who craps candy. Fear me. -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 07:01, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Yay. Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 20:02, December 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Sure, yay. =GuardDog 13:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) I might want to change a few things myself... tomorrow, so I will get back to this later. -- Master Sima Yi 23:41, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) As for the infobox image, I asked Jpulowski (The guy that provided the image for all Templar Agents and a few others) if he could find something. He hasn't replied yet. Nesty  Contact me! 12:50, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Rashid ad-Din Sinan - Yay
I'm sexy and I know it! -- Jack WallsSupermen 08:19, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also known as "Al Mualim". He was already GA, and I think I improved the page massively (if I may say so myself). I removed the random quotes, moved the images around, reworded the entire page, fixed the final words section, etc. etc. Not good enough? Let me know and I'll improve it. Nesty Contact me! 19:46, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator Nesty  Contact me! 19:46, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Good job. -- Master Sima Yi 23:41, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Well done.  Subject 12  Talk to me 13:15, December 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Nice. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  05:57, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Looks good. -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 07:01, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Old people rule! -- Jack Walls<font color="#FFF700">Supermen 19:43, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Abbas Sofian - Yay
You ain't sexy, Jack.. XD --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 16:40, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Already gave the page a revamp a while back prior to Revelations ' release, now I cleared the page up. All info is on there, the formatting is good, pictures are good. I think it's worthy of FA status. Got any comments, leave them below. -- Master Sima Yi 23:41, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As nominator. -- Master Sima Yi 23:41, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Yay. Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 23:43, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice  Subject 12  Talk to me 13:15, December 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Because you wanted my vote so desperately... now make sure you get actual staff votes xD Nesty  Contact me! 14:23, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Yay. (Notice how I spelled it backwards). -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  00:28, December 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Looks good. =GuardDog 13:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Levantine Assassins - Yay
Sufficient staff votes, been here long enough and no nays.. --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 03:14, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

All known info is on there, high quality images, proper formatting. I'm quite fond of it myself, and I see no reason why this couldn't be FA status. -- Master Sima Yi 12:00, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) Me! -- Master Sima Yi 12:00, December 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) And me! Nesty  Contact me! 09:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Yay. Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 15:40, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * random dancing* -- Jack Walls<font color="#FFF700">Supermen 15:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Interesting read. =GuardDog 03:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Interesting read. =GuardDog 03:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lucy Stillman - Yay
Been here long enough with sufficient vote.. --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 02:37, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

You know the routine by now: reworded, moved images around, fixed some sourcing, removed some OOU comments, fixed some links, etc. etc. If it is not good enough yet, let me know and I'll attent to it. Nesty Contact me! 09:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator Nesty  Contact me! 09:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Me! -- Master Sima Yi 22:12, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Yay. Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 15:40, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Looks good. =GuardDog 03:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Yay. --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 02:37, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Clay Kaczmarek - Closed
The possibility of an upcoming DLC prevents staff from voting. Vote closed until we have more news. Nesty Contact me! 12:27, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

The last one on the list Sima gave me, so please be so kind as to vote. If it is not good enough, I'll edit it and make it better! Nesty Contact me! 10:09, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator Nesty  Contact me! 10:09, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Me! -- Master Sima Yi 22:12, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  03:32, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Yay. Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 15:40, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) With the upcoming DLC, new Info is bound to be added. With that, new information will need to be placed. Until then, I will not vote. Teller  Words, On my Screen :O 05:28, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Was the DLC confirmed? The article looks good and reads well, but if there really is upcoming info, I'm with Story on this one. =GuardDog 03:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) The DLC has not yet been confirmed, though it is very likely. Also, I have taken it up to myself to saveguard this page from vandalism/speculation and to add the upcoming info myself upon release. Nesty  Contact me! 09:53, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) What those guys said. -- Jack Walls<font color="#FFF700">Supermen 12:13, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Maria Thorpe - Yay
Hmm, Lucy and Maria. Interesting.. --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 02:37, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sima and I both worked on this page, and we believe it to have everything it needs. It has information, it has quotes, it has images, and it definately has style. Time to vote once again people! Nesty Contact me! 22:45, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator Nesty  Contact me! 22:45, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I worked on this! -- Master Sima Yi 23:01, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Yay. Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 15:40, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Not the work I had in mind to make, but I guess it'll do for now. Hoo-RAH! -- Jack Walls<font color="#FFF700">Supermen 12:12, January 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Altayeer.. --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 02:37, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) The early life could use some expansion (like the mention of that Peter guy). I'll see if I can do it myself. -- Jack  Walls<font color="#FFF700">Supermen 15:41, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Hidden Blade - Yay
Agreed and closed.. --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 02:37, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

This page's already made GA, and since then, several quotes, images and two new sections (Design and Templar Replicas) have been added. Seems worthy to me now, but please say so if something needs to be fixed. =GuardDog 17:01, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As nominator. =GuardDog 17:01, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) And.. And... And.... IT'S GOOD! :O Teller  Words, On my Screen :O 03:37, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) And.. And... And.... IT WILL BE FEATURED! :O Nesty  Contact me! 22:05, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Very well written and thorough, and it also has an abundance of great images to accompany it. Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 23:22, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) And...and...Nah, I got nothing. -- Jack Walls<font color="#FFF700">Supermen 12:16, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Riot at the Harbor of Theodosius - Yay
--Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 04:52, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

TST and I both worked on this article, and have consulted with Guard. After rounds of editing and lots of rewording, we believe the article is ready for FA status. Thanks for voting. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 00:54, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As co-revamper and nominator. Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 00:54, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Had a Nay vote. But -S- took my victory so it's Yay now. Teller  Words, On my Screen :O 01:17, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Don't be hatin' -- Jack Walls<font color="#FFF700">Supermen 13:55, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Yay. Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 15:39, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Much better. Yay for me too now. =GuardDog 04:30, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) Much better. Yay for me too now. = Nesty Contact me! 22:49, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Nay

 * 1) Not trying to be a pain here, but keep in mind that an FA article needs to be understandable for all our users. An articles quality is not determined by the amount of "difficult" words in it. Reword it a bit more and I'll change my vote.  Nesty  Contact me! 04:37, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) Pre-event details are a bit lengthy; it might actually be better to shorten or skip Shadowing. The opening section could use a mention of the aftermath, and its last two paragraphs about Suleiman might be better suited for the body, rather than the opening. But otherwise, information seems complete and flows well, will vote after changes. =GuardDog 09:36, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) I've done some work based off of your comments, which I hope should change your vote; if you still believe it needs work, however, then I understand as well.  Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 20:24, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) I've done a bit of rewording per Nesty's request, and I believe it should be simpler to read now.  Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 12:04, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Skirmish in the Campagna District - Yay
Three staff votes and been here over a week.. --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 04:17, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

I've reworded nearly the entire article, as it was basically a walkthrough of the entire event prior to my revamp. I've also inserted new images into the article, and I did some work with the infobox. I believe it is of FA quality, and I have implemented some suggestions Guard has given me. Thanks for voting. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 18:57, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As nominator and revamper. Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 18:57, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Could do with some more pictures but still very good. Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 19:36, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) As mentioned, all my comments have been covered. =GuardDog 01:28, January 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) I could've said Nay... nah, I couldn't. Good work. Teller  Words, On my Screen :O 02:21, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Infiltration of the Janissary camp - Yay
Hmmm.. --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 04:17, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

I've done a good amount of expansion on the article, primarily in the Aftermath and opening sections. I've also reworded most of the article, replacing quotes and images as well. Furthermore, I did some work to tidy up the infobox, and I believe it's ready for FA. Thanks for voting, everyone. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 11:54, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As nominator and revamper. Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 11:54, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Yay from me. =GuardDog 13:13, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Much better. Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 21:27, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) I read this article yesterday, I procrastinated like a boss. -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 02:24, January 24, 2012 (UTC)