User blog comment:Desmond32/The Piece Of Eden/@comment-2065587-20140328231807/@comment-27202257-20140404063234

Don't blame your grammar on your age. Plenty of 15-year-olds have perfectly good grammar. Yours is your own--own it.

Also, 16 is not related to Altair, as William specifically notes that Desmond is the convergence of Altair and Ezio's family lines.