Assassin's Creed Wiki:Featured Article Nominations/Archive 4

 This page lists all the previous nominations for Featured status. Every article nominations listed here have been concluded, and transferred here for reviewing purposes only.

Destruction of the Great Chain - Yay
Nesty did not vote Nay so her vote is not accounted for. Overall, good article and worth FA Status. -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 01:40, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Although it is a rather brief article, I believe it is written to an FA standard and has some cool images to accompany it. I've attempted to do as much expansion as possible, though this event is just terse overall. Thanks for voting. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 06:04, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As nominator and revamper. Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 06:04, January 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Yay. Good work. Though I personally do not like the infobox picture or the Greek Fire one. Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 15:19, January 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Mmmmhmm. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  23:30, January 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Damn, I'm good at my procrastination but I had to vote eventually so why not now? :P -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 02:24, January 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yep, everything's been cleared for me. =GuardDog 12:27, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) There was a lot of unnecessary information. The description of the Great Chain wasn't needed, that's what the link to its separate article is for. And the Aftermath section was far too detailed, I deleted most of that. Otherwise the rest of it is good, just one minor thing. In the Meeting with Yusuf Tazim section, it mentions Ezio and Yusuf discussing the bomb, yet the quote for that part is in the next section, making it a bit out of place. So a new quote is needed for the Destruction and escape section. Once that's done I'll vote Yay. --  'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  13:39, January 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Alright, thanks for that Blaidd. I just added the only quote from AC:R that is relevant to the Destruction and escape section. It's not great, but it's better than anything the novel could provide.  Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 21:38, January 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) I don't like it... But I won't vote nay unless I can figure out why I don't like it... Nesty  Contact me! 22:15, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Fall of the Palaiologi - Yay
--Vatsa ( talk • Gentek ) 03:57, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I've reworded and restructured most of the page, and added in some cool, HQ images to accompany it. I've also added, replaced, and revised some quotes. I believe the article is worthy of FA currently. Thanks for voting everybody. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 21:15, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As nominator and revamper. Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 21:15, January 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Yay from me. =GuardDog 14:15, January 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Yes. Very good. Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 15:48, January 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) I like it, I won't vote nay until I figure out what I don't like about it. XD -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 21:39, January 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) There were still quite a few things I needed to fix on it. Luckily I managed to pull myself away from Skyrim for this page. You should be very grateful. =P -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  14:48, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Nay

 * 1) The article doesn't seem right to me, I think it needs to be more detailed and specific in some areas. --  'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  16:51, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) Well, it could be expanded in some areas such as the Confrontation with Manuel and the Destruction of Byzantine Weaponry could use a minor expansion along with the Aftermath which is only a minor expansion, don't go into too much detail with that. If this is done, I'll vote Yay. -- Teller  Words, On my Screen :O 19:30, January 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) In response to Blaidd and TST's comments, I have revised, expanded, and detailed the article. Please reconsider your votes guys. Thanks.  Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 21:34, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Yusuf Tazim - Yay
And that is a wrap! -- Jack WallsSupermen 12:25, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

I've written out most of his details since finishing Revelations. The article's not very long, but information seems complete, and it has a sufficient number of quotes and Vatsa's quality images. =GuardDog 09:44, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As nominator. =GuardDog 09:44, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nay, oh wait... this is the Yay section. What am I doing here? Oo Teller  Words, On my Screen :O 18:31, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Where is his hookblade? -- Jack WallsSupermen 14:35, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) What is a hookblade? -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  14:46, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) A hook with a blade... or was it the other way around? O.o -- Nesty  Contact me! 20:55, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Nope. See, it has two parts, a hook and a blade. --Vatsa ( talk • Gentek ) 03:57, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Dey hook, and dey blade. -- Master Sima Yi 09:38, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sofia Sartor - Yay
...Yeah, nothing clever to add. In fact, nothing at all to add. Except this one, which technically makes it "something to add." -- Jack WallsSupermen 12:25, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Done a lot of stuff on this page. Made sure all's in there, more stuff, yadi yadi yada. Not much to add, really. And...that's all. -- Jack WallsSupermen 14:34, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) Hoo-RAH! -- Jack WallsSupermen 14:34, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) FUS RO DAH! Nesty  Contact me! 20:57, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Blimey! -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 22:54, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Dees ees knowledge de world has lost, and must have again. -- Master Sima Yi 09:38, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Huzzah! =GuardDog 14:34, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Ezio Auditore da Firenze - Yay
Guess i'm not the only person on this wiki's staff with a typo issue.. --Vatsa ( talk • Gentek ) 03:18, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Revanped the page, especially rewording the Revelations/Embers info, which was a mess. I think it's good enough for FA now.. if you disagree, just let me know and I'll have another go at it.

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator Nesty  Contact me! 15:47, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) That's it for me. =GuardDog 16:06, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) That Hot Chocolate was delicious by the way. -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 16:26, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Yay. Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 14:12, February 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) I would like to sincerely apologize for the delay in my revoting; I did not even notice Guard's comment about the improvements until now. Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 01:51, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Nay

 * 1) The wording needs to be improved, and some sentences and parts need to be trimmed and refined. Also, the spacing needs to be fixed as there are many long paragraphs that could be separated for a cleaner appearance. Lastly, the grammar could use some work.  Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 17:32, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) The later parts are much better now, but now I'm nitpicking the earlier ones :p Will vote after I finish my pass of rewording (...which may take a while). =GuardDog 14:09, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nos, could you please be more specific on where the needlessly lengthy paragraphs are? I cut them myself, and each paragraph's ideas seem to be grouped appropriately - though naturally, I could be wrong. =GuardDog 12:27, February 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) I wouldn't say needlessly lengthy, I just think that some more spacing could make the article easier to read and have a better appearance. For example, in the opening section in the paragraph "During his travels...," I believe that could be spread into two paragraphs at like "He ensured the future...." It might be an odd comment, but it's just my opinion on it, though you obviously know far better than I, Guard, so do what you feel is right; I just believe that the spacing could provide an easier-to-read appearance.  Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 22:41, February 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Thanks for the input - seriously, it's a really long article, a lot of eyes on it is necessary :p I've gone over the spacing of what you mentioned, so hopefully it's better. =GuardDog 23:10, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Colosseum Passion Play - Yay
Yay-- -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 19:39, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I've reworded and detailed most of the article. I've also cleaned up the infobox and expanded the opening section. Lastly, I also replaced the images previously there with new, HQ images provided by Vatsa. Thanks for voting. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 21:27, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As nominator and revamper. Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 21:27, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes, nothing to complain about. -- Jack WallsSupermen 17:35, February 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Yay from me. =GuardDog 12:27, February 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Sorry Nesty but I believe it's fine. Good enough for Featured and good enough for a Yay vote from me! -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 05:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Yay. Much better. Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 15:23, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Nay

 * 1) I think I said this before, but the wording could be a lot simpler and easier to understand (keep in mind, English is not everyone's native language and we do want everyone to be able to read our articles). The amount of "difficult" words does not determine the quality of an article. The infobox image could be better, though the rest of the images are good. Some of the quotes don't really work, so you might want to have a look at that too. There were also some punctuation mistakes that will have to be taken care of, but I can do those myself when I have the time. That's all, I believe. Oh, and sorry for being so negative xD  Nesty  Contact me! 18:17, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) Though the article is much, much better, the infobox picture needs to be changed.  Assassin-Rome  (Talk if you will) 16:29, February 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Personally, I think it's fine. Only the image is what needs changing to earn my vote. As Rome said, certainly much better then before. -- Teller  Words, On my Screen :O 20:58, February 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) I've replaced the infobox image and have done some other things to the article. Please reconsider your votes, guys. Thanks. Nostalgia AC  Let's talk. 22:12, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Francesco Vecellio - Yay
Yay from me.. --Vatsa ( talk • Gentek ) 11:41, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Another Project Legacy character with a detailed background, since he's mentioned in 5 different chapters. It was written out a while back, but I'm pretty sure the needed information and images are there. =GuardDog 11:45, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As nominator. =GuardDog 11:45, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good. Nesty  Contact me! 13:41, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Could use a higher-quality infobox image, but still a great article. -- Nostalgia Let’s talk. 01:57, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) A good read. :) -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 08:13, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Shaun Hastings - Yay
Sure there won't be any info in AC3? --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 11:41, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Let's see... it's been a while since I nominated anything. I reworded the entire page, changed the sections, moved quotes to their proper positions. It also has good images and all the info we have on him. Let me know when you need something changed. Nesty Contact me! 13:41, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator. Nesty  Contact me! 13:41, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Yay from me. New images in particular look good. =GuardDog 01:40, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Looks great. -- Nostalgia Let’s talk. 01:57, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Aaaahh this takes me back. First ever legit revamp. Thing has doubled in size since then, but just as awesome. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  07:49, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Hopefully, much better, I saw footage of you at Abstergo, you didn't even try to escape. -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 08:13, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Claudia Auditore da Firenze - Yay
3 votes, but this has been here over a week.. --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 11:41, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Don't worry, I won't go on another mass-nomination spree that causes an aversion to voting for all of you... Not this time, at least. This page had its nomination coming for a long time, and just needed some minor things fixed (in my opinion, that is). Let me know what you think. Nesty Contact me! 10:17, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator. Nesty  Contact me! 10:17, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) I think it's very nice. ^^ Though I hope you add abit more quotes up. -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 08:13, March 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Woof. -- Master Sima Yi 15:55, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) Anyone actually plan to vote sometime soon? It's one of the Istruttore duties, remember? Nesty  Contact me! 06:57, March 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) If you put some more quotes up, I will vote. -- Master Sima Yi 07:07, March 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Quotes have been added. Nesty  Contact me! 15:47, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Bartolomeo d'Alviano - Yay
It's been a week. Five yays, no nays. Nesty Contact me! 09:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

I guess you all know how it works by now. Let's just get to the voting :). Nesty  Contact me! 12:41, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator Nesty  Contact me! 12:41, March 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Knew I'd get around to it. But where is Teller, hmmm? -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  13:25, March 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Worked on this some time ago, seems like my unfinished work is done now. -- Master Sima Yi 21:24, March 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4)  Twelve  Talk to me 05:57, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) How he got laid by a chick like Pantis-- something is beyond me. -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 10:29, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

La Volpe - Yay
It's been a week. Five yays, no nays. Nesty Contact me! 09:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Did a lot of work on this one. Reworded, added quotes, replaced images, changed the lay-out, minor changes to the trivia section... Now let's vote! Nesty Contact me! 10:17, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator Nesty  Contact me! 10:17, March 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Gilly! -- 'R BlaiddDdraig  Enter...  THE SCARY DOOR  13:25, March 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Same for Barto. -- Master Sima Yi 21:24, March 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4)  Twelve  Talk to me 05:57, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) LIKE...A...FOX -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 10:29, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Warren Vidic - Closed
Warren has already been made FA some time ago. Nesty Contact me! 07:51, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Hey there, I know I'm not really an Apprentice any more, nor a staff member either, but I've recently revamped Warren Vidic and I noticed it was GA, so I figured I might see what you think about it. Also, I'd like a pretty userbox. :P Slate Vesper 03:05, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Paola - Yay
Seems everyone is too busy to vote.. --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 09:43, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Did everything I could on this page. Added quotes, expanded the intro, reworded the entire article, provided better images, removed duplicate images, fixed sourcing... I know it's not the longest of our pages, but I think it does contain everything we know about her, and it fits the MoS, so I don't see why it shouldn't be FA. Nesty Contact me! 11:21, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator. Nesty  Contact me! 11:21, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Master Sima Yi 22:11, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Two admin votes. Closing this tomorrow unless someone has any objections.. --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 06:52, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * What is this a vote? Oh what? It is? Damnit! >.< -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 10:56, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) Anyone? Nesty  Contact me! 06:46, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Teodora Contanto - Yay
Sort of odd angle when I tried to get a screenshot of her burns.. --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 09:43, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

And another one. Have to keep myself busy, no? Anyways, I'd appreciate it if you would take the time to vote again. It is, after all, an Istruttore's duty to do so ;) Nesty  Contact me! 12:18, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator. Nesty  Contact me! 12:18, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Master Sima Yi 22:11, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Seems the Staff is busy.. --Vatsa</tt> ( talk • Gentek ) 06:52, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) *nodnod* -- Teller  Words, On my Screen :O 10:56, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lucrezia Borgia - Yay
No active staff, again.. -- 03:54, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lucrezia Borgia. I revamped the page, did everything I could think of and think it is ready now. If you disagree, let me know why and I'll be sure to fix it. Thanks for voting people. Nesty Contact me! 19:21, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator. Nesty  Contact me! 19:21, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Adjusted some links, but otherwise it looks clean and complete to me. Also, the last trivia point could use a source, not so sure if it's verified. =GuardDog 01:58, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) --  Master Sima Yi  Clogs Marvel Studios 11:39, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Yes, please.  Aegis Runestone Speak to me 04:31, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) Added the source for the last trivia point, thanks for pointing it out. Nesty  Contact me! 05:35, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Clay Kaczmarek - Yay
So voting's dead?.. -- 09:31, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

My first shot at a Featured Article and my second article assignment. With the help of Sima, Dark and my mentor, Teller, I've expanded the intro and reworded the article. If you have any comments about how to repair it beyond its current condition, let me know. Thanks for voting. Stormbeast The Helpful Place 02:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator. Stormbeast  The Helpful Place 02:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Made some small changes and cut out some duplicate links, but other than that, I vote yay. Slate Vesper 06:00, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) I already had a go at this sometime ago, but people didn't want it for FA because of the upcoming Lost Archive. Guess now's the time then. Nesty  Contact me! 06:13, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Good work mate. ^^ -- Teller Words, On my Screen :O 05:45, June 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Nice work, Storm.-- Odranoelluta Talk ✲ http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/marvel-cinematic-universe/images/1/18/Sig.png 08:06, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Juan Borgia the Elder - Yay
I guess the rest of the people didn't feel like voting then? Nesty Contact me! 09:16, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Another one from the targets project. Let me know if something needs to be fixed, I'll be around quite a bit in the coming days, so I'll make sure this gets through :) Nesty  Contact me! 08:45, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yay

 * 1) As revamper/nominator. Nesty  Contact me! 08:45, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Not too fond of having an Animus corridor picture in the biography section, but it will do. -- 09:50, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) -- 10:54, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Well, after I gave it a look, I had to fix a fair few bits of it. That aside, I see no reason why it can't be featured. Slate Vesper 12:29, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) What... no votes!? :( Nesty  Contact me! 08:49, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Currently there seems to be an absence of staff and regular users, Nesty.. XD -- 09:31, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) And it's also because you nominate way too much articles; it's not interesting anymore to vote. -- 09:34, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Voting isn't meant to be "interesting." It's meant to make the wiki better. But fine, this shall then be my last nomination. Nesty  Contact me! 09:41, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * No, but it's probably why people don't vote. Just nominate articles at a slower pace and it'll be fine. -- 09:49, June 16, 2012 (UTC)