ACFanon talk:The Birth/@comment-4829046-20130516111157/@comment-4829046-20130517141154

Okay then here's an example. I'll try to keep the basic content in so you can see what changes I did.

Yours = "It's June 5th, 1890, a beautiful spring day in Belgrade, Kingdom of Serbia but a young woman was suffering. I woman was giving birth to her new offspring, with her husband with her side she thought she could overcome the pain, she was lying to herself. The doctor made it to the room as fast as he can but the wife was throwing a fit like no tomorrow."

Mine = June 5th, in the year 1890, in Belgrade, the Kingdom of Serbia was a beautiful Spring day. On this day however, one young woman was in pain. She was giving birth. (the next bit is slightly mean but meh! I'll let you keep it) She was trying to convince herself that she could overcome the pain as long as her husband was at her side, even though she knew she was lying. The doctor arrived and made his way to the room as fast as he could and saw that the woman was throwing a tremendous fit as if there was no tomorrow.

Something like this. I suggest you go for more English classes so that you can express your ideas better.