User blog:Theatomic Derek/My fanfic

The Day before tomorow.

Altair reached the top of the building. The hot jerusalem sun was beating down apon his head it was times like this he thanked god for his hood. He looked over the ledge at the busy market square. Noon and the city center was already as busy as it was going to get. Altair should of left sooner. It was near impossible for a normal man to see his target in this crowd but then again Altair was no normal man he was an assassin. His senses sharpened to those of an eagle. He then saw a man tucking a note into his coin purse he also had a cross around his neck. This must be Brother Horatio. He removed a knife from his belt and threw it to the left of the priests head thank god there was a breeze today. The knife curved striking the priest in the eye knocking the priest off of his feet. Guards ran in from every direction. Altair took a run up and dived off of the roof and into a cart of hay watching as the guards carried the unconsios body of the priest into the church. Altiar neede a way in. Then he saw them. A group of monks wearing similar garments to himself. He sliped in with them and followed them into the church falling behind when they got past the guards he ran towards the priests chamber and entered before the priest had time to scream Altair had plunged his hidden blade into the priests neck. He then opened the coin purse and removed the note he then climbed through the window and into the busy streets of damascus.

By theatomic DEREK

Authors comment

This is my first fan fiction please be brutal and give me ways to improve my story I would realy appreciate it. Thanks